„Errata“ for Elegy for Young Lovers

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Errata

Synopsis *

p ‡ 4. line 36-7. for definite negative negative read definite negative

p 5. l ‡ 33. for pale an shaken read pale and shaken

Genesis of a libretto *

p 9. end. for Kallmann read Kallman

Act I

p II, line 8. for Mittenhoer read Mittenhofexxxxxxxxxx ‡ Mittenhofer

p II line s ‡ 25-9.‡ " In[sic] ‡ these new songs he strikes a note of passionate delight
And shows a force no other poet of our time can match"....
"Again we recognise in him the Master of us all"....
"The peak of his achievement"...."flawless verse"..."authentic"
...."grand..."

(no inverted commas in copy)

p ll. l. ‡ 39. for Dont read Don’t

p l2. l ‡ l0 for Alvetern read Edelweiss

l ‡ 23 for Headache read headache

l ‡ 30 for Carolxxxxx ‡ Caronia read Carolina

p l3 lin e ‡ 2 for trompets read trumpets

p ‡ l7. line 9 for shall read Shall

l ‡ 42. dletexxxxx ‡ delete underlining of "I know I know"

p ‡ I8, linxxx ‡ after l ‡ 23 for Love too is also lost. read Love too is also lost.
Falala
(see preceding stanzas)

p ‡ I9, l ‡ l5 for Gorgeous read George *

l ‡ l7 for Milksop read Rilke *

l ‡ 20 for Huff-and-Puff read Hofmannsthal *

l ‡ 24 for They went do read They won’t do!

p 2I. l ‡ l5 delete VII. Unwordly Weakness

l ‡ l7 The stage direction Tolls begin to be heard from the valley
should come after l ‡ 20,Death in fact lookex ‡ ‡s da z ‡zingly
at t ‡ractive

l ‡ 2l For VIII read VII

p 22. l ‡ 2l l5 for IX read VIII

p 23‡ l 3 for X read IX

p 24 l l for frtaxxxx ‡ Forta years read Forty years

l l3 for enterd eradxxxx ‡ read entered

l 35 for Hildas read Hilda’s

l 37 for XI read X

p 25 l ll for XII read XI

Act II

p 26. line 29-30 For I dwelt in a world read I dwelt in a world,
O ‡f anonymous shadow, An anonymous shadow,

p 27 l 36 for No older poets read Not older poets

p 29 l 38 for the ouides all cheat her read the guides all cheat her

p 3I l II for weren’t you,me dear, read weren’t you, my dear,

p 32 l 5 for To bee free for, read To be free for,

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p ‡ 4.	line 36-7.	for definite negative negative read definite negative
p 5.	l ‡ 33.	for pale an shaken read pale and shaken

p II,	line 8.	for Mittenhoer read Mittenhofexxxxxxxxxx ‡ Mittenhofer
p II	line s ‡ 25-9.‡	" In[sic] ‡ these new songs he strikes a note of passionate delight And shows a force no other poet of our time can match".... "Again we recognise in him the Master of us all".... "The peak of his achievement"...."flawless verse"..."authentic" ...."grand..."

p ll.	l. ‡ 39.	for Dont read Don’t
p l2.	l ‡ l0	for Alvetern read Edelweiss
	l ‡ 23	for Headache read headache
	l ‡ 30	for Carolxxxxx ‡ Caronia read Carolina
p l3	lin e ‡ 2	for trompets read trumpets
p ‡ l7.	line 9	for shall read Shall
	l ‡ 42.	dletexxxxx ‡ delete underlining of "I know I know"
p ‡ I8,	linxxx ‡ after l ‡ 23	for Love too is also lost. read Love too is also lost. Falala (see preceding stanzas)
p ‡ I9,	l ‡ l5	for Gorgeous read George *
	l ‡ l7	for Milksop read Rilke *
	l ‡ 20	for Huff-and-Puff read Hofmannsthal *
	l ‡ 24	for They went do read They won’t do!
p 2I.	l ‡ l5	delete VII. Unwordly Weakness
	l ‡ l7	The stage direction Tolls begin to be heard from the valley should come after l ‡ 20,Death in fact lookex ‡ ‡s da z ‡zingly at t ‡ractive
	l ‡ 2l	For VIII read VII
p 22.	l ‡ 2l l5	for IX read VIII
p 23‡	l 3	for X read IX
p 24	l l	for frtaxxxx ‡ Forta years read Forty years
	l l3	for enterd eradxxxx ‡ read entered
	l 35	for Hildas read Hilda’s
	l 37	for XI read X
p 25	l ll	for XII read XI

p 26.	line 29-30	For I dwelt in a world read I dwelt in a world, O ‡f anonymous shadow, An anonymous shadow,
p 27	l 36	for No older poets read Not older poets
p 29	l 38	for the ouides all cheat her read the guides all cheat her
p 3I	l II	for weren’t you,me dear, read weren’t you, my dear,
p 32	l 5	for To bee free for, read To be free for,